I'm back with another blog and this one is quite different from the others, I'm here to share with y'all my writing journey... So I hope u guys like it and honestly I feel happy for every small milestone I've accomplished.
So down here is my first poem which isn't really a poem I mean it was supposed to be a poem, anyways it was written 5 years ago so I'll paste it down here and I'll give y'all an updated version of it. I'll also tell y'all few of the things I've learnt over the years in the field of writing.
2020's version:-
when a person feels they are not worth and does all kinds of things to please you.
and you just don't understand why are they doing all of this for me
and when you find out ...
they do all of this because they
love you.
tears roll down your eyes and you feel your not worth for them.
2025's version:-
Sometimes I don't know how worthy I am,
I do all sorts of things just to please you.
But somehow you'd never understand me
Cause my love isn't meant to be seen it's felt
But someday you'll understand that you missed a gem, and I know that day
You'll come back to me, my love...
Okay so basically this is it, I might not have changed a lot of things but I feel like grammatically I have made mistakes in the 2020 version but this time I haven't... And few of the things I've learnt over the years would be...
#its not about how long it is, the word count just doesn't matter.
#the readers need to find it engaging and relatable.
#poetry is all about letting words flow, so don't be afraid to experiment with different styles...
And yea that's about it, I'm still learning, but I know that one day I will master the art of poetry... And I will not give up as I believe that it takes consistency and patience to archive great things...
So that's it for today I'll see y'all in my next blog until then it's bye bye from me take care keep reading and keep inspiring 💞 ✨
( I haven't checked my blog today so if y'all find any mistakes kindly dm me) byee
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